Friday, May 27, 2011

Language Building Development

So... I've decided to come up with two languages simultaneously, upon discovering that Portuguese and Ancient Galacian are all but the same language. That, mixed with my 5 years of Spanish and my 5 weeks of Russian have emboldened me!

My 1st language, Waeglyt, shall be the Wygar's language, and based on old Slavic languages.
My 2nd language, and most recent project, is called Lilaian, and is based on a corruption of Latin. As I intend its speakers to be analogous to the Roman Empire, I thought it fitting that they speak a derivative of Latin. It'll be the Seventh Romance Language! Haha! The others, in order from the Latin, I think: Italian, Galacian, French, Romanian, Portuguese, and Spanish.

Plus... I know Portuguese, and to my surprise, a good deal of Galacian (they're almost identical!). So it'd be easier to come up with a language derived from one I speak, right? So I started by writing a simple poem... sort of derived from the old Spanish hymn Riu, Riu, Chiu:

Weep, weep, river, for those you would protect
For they are devoured by the beasts of the forest
Cast thyself, river, between deathly shores
Then your blessed children will be delivered

Lira, lira, rau pru tuis protetrat
Pos manducat prus coueri florestat
Tira, tira, rau, intrels malourae mourtai
Tou illivrat era tuis lilae bellelai

Tuesday, May 24, 2011

The Velociraptor Chronicles part III

Behold: the day-dawn was breaking. The young man (with whom this story concerns itself) was not terribly excited about this prospect. The bed was much more inviting than the cold rays of the sun that were not shining through the clouds. And wind. And rain. At length he forced himself out of bed and to his feet. He cast a longing look towards his bed, and his bed cast a longing look towards him. The two must part, they knew, though that knowledge hardly eased their heartbreak. Alas, they bade their farewells, and John’s morn began.
            The peanut butter and jelly sandwich was the next thing to greet John, and it anticipated the meeting. It had been planning for this meeting for months in advance: ever since it had been purchased, in its separate components, it had waited for the day that the cereal would run out, and the young man would be forced to eat the PB&J instead. It had grown a healthy culture of mold – healthy, and quite advanced, too, making great advances in art, science, and especially military conquest in all its moldy glory – and hidden it from John until the peanut butter had been spread and the precious jelly expended. Just as he was about to take his first bite, the sandwich couldn’t help but giggle in anticipation, alarming John somewhat. A second look at the sandwich, and its plot was foiled.
            The mold itself was thoroughly disappointed. It was no ordinary mold, to be cut off from its home bread and cast into the trash! It had suffered so much for this invasive moment! It was no easy feat to move a whole horde a spore-based lifeforms to action, nor organize them into legions, armed and trained for battle. They had sat, poised, as they saw the gaping maw of the young man stretching forever before them, preparing to leap into the deep blackness within. Then, to their horror, the two horizons of his lips, above and beneath, rushed shut – quite shut – and then disappeared from view. Instead, the world became a blur, and the rushing of wind welcomed them into the oblivion of the trash bin.
            John’s roommates were largely unconscious of this dramatic exchange. In fact, they were largely unconscious of anything, owing to their being largely unconscious. This was not an uncommon state to be in before 9 a.m. in this apartment.
            Unbeknownst to any within the apartment, though, an eerie visitor watched them from without the basement-floor windows. It tracked John’s movements as he meandered to and from his room and the kitchen. He had been very quiet, it observed. It noticed that he made no sudden movements, almost as if he were aware of its presence, aware of its gaze. Once or twice he jerked his head toward the window, only to see the sidewalk beyond it empty – the visitor dodging out of sight just in time. At length, the time had come. John had put on his coat, and his messenger bag slung over his shoulder. The visitor hastened down the stairwell to the door John would inevitably open. Slowly the handle turned, and
            Click
                        Swing

            They stood face-to-face. John, and the velociraptor. Again. This time, the velociraptor was not so slow to react. It leapt forward, claws reaching for John’s throat. The claws never found purchase in his flesh. Before it had time to react, John was gone – no, beneath it as it leapt through the air, rolling on the floor and leaping to his feet just as the velociraptor landed. It turned to face him in time to see the door slam, and hear John’s footsteps  fade out of earshot. Enraged, it ran to the door, and found it locked. It cursed in Velociraptor under its breath. It could open doors, yes, but its clawed extremities were not well-suited for handling tiny locking mechanisms. Chagrined, it turned to face John’s roommates, who stood  with arms folded, scowling in disappointment at it. It hung its head.
            “I have failed you again, masters,” it said, voice breaking.

Thursday, May 19, 2011

The Velociraptor Chronicles part II

So. My creative writing class. Fun! Only my teacher prefers such somber, depressing literature. And gives us the most bizarre prompts to write about. Also, he seems to make a point of not calling upon me to read my resulting literary work (he calls on 2-3 people per class period to read something they have written. 5 weeks have gone by and I haven't been selected yet). So I decided that my goal in this class is to somehow incorporate velociraptors into everything I write from his interesting prompts.

This one was the Minimal Prompt. Trying to give us very little material to work with: we were told we were to describe our morning with one imaginary conflict, using ONLY nouns and verbs. No adjectives, no and's, a's, the's, or anything.

The writing prompt is only supposed to give us about 10 minutes. He gave us about 20. I ran out of stuff to write halfway through.

Awake. Alert. Sniff sniff. Aha: Liberty.

Embark – bed no more. Floor. Carpet. Stagger. Stagger stagger. Ouch! Wall. About turn! Stagger stagger.
           
    ‘Morning, Roommate! Asleep? Couch? Odd.
                           
    Stagger stagger. Fridge! Food! Food!

                                               …Waffles.

W A F F L E S.


W            A             F              F              L              E              S.

               And banana.

                   ‘Morning, toaster! Receive waffles!
           
            Oh, wafting scent! Wafting scent!
                           
    Kachink!


W      A       F        F        L        E        S.
     
    ‘Morning, syrup! Aha: the mapleness.
       
    Devour. DEVOUR. Devour.
       
    ‘Morning clock! Oh dear – 5 minutes. Time-lack! Depart! Shoes – on! Old Spice – on
(Hello, Ladies. Look – man. Back – me. Back – man. BACK – ME).
       
    Open door.
       
    ‘Morning, Velociraptor.
                   
    Velociraptor.


Shut door.
       
    Closet!

AK-47.
                   
    Breathe. Breathe. Pant. Pant. Sweat. Breathe!
                               
    AK-47.
                                           
        Open door.
       
            Velociraptor?
                   
                Gone.
                   
                Packs. Pack-hunters. Sneaky.

Left – nothing. Right – nothing. Class – Oh no! 3 minutes.
                                              
To class?
                                           
        CEILING!!!
                                           
            VELOCIRAPTOR!!!
            
    AK-47!!!
       
    Rambo.
                   
    Awesomeness.
                               
    Minus one velociraptor.
                                           
    Remove head. Trophy!
                                           
    Store head. Freezer. ‘Morning, other roommates!
                   
    Check watch – 1 minute. Run?
       
    …run?

…run?
WAFFLES

Okay, run.
       
    Run. Run. Run. Class! Run. Oh no! Clothes – velociraptor blood! Cold-blooded. Freezing! Return! Apartment! Return! Run! Pant pant pant BREATHE BREATHE BREATHE. Deposit clothes. Replace clothes. Depart! Trip – dead velociraptor! ‘Morning, ground!
                   
    Run. Run. Run. Run. Run. Run. Run. Breathe. Gasp. Run. Breathe. INHALE! Work, alveoli! Work, alveoli! Function, bronchioles!  Function! I think I can I think I can! I know I can I know I can! I KNOW I CAN I KNOW I CAN!
       
    Class! Door locked! Check clock!
                   
    I thought I could I thought I could (steal from Gary Larson!).
       
    Sit. Sit. Class. Read. Write. Module. Module!!!! Thoughts – not module-thoughts.
                   
    Not module thoughts.
                                  
Velociraptor thoughts!
       
              … waffle thoughts.
       
    module module module module
                   
    Story! Invented! Students inventing? Random! Merlin! Apocalypse! Zombies! Donuts! Submarine! ...velociraptors.
           
    Story – write. Morning? Morning. Morning. Morning – awesomeness. Velociraptors.

W A F F L E S
                       World
                       Amnesty
                       Foundation
                       For
                       Long-
                       Endangered
                       Species

                                   …like VELOCIRAPTORS

The Velociraptor Chronicles part I

So. My creative writing class. Fun! Only my teacher prefers such somber, depressing literature. And gives us the most bizarre prompts to write about. Also, he seems to make a point of not calling upon me to read my resulting literary work (he calls on 2-3 people per class period to read something they have written. 5 weeks have gone by and I haven't been selected yet). So I decided that my goal in this class is to somehow incorporate velociraptors into everything I write from his interesting prompts.

This one was from the Photo Prompt: a Depression-era photo of a woman in threadbare clothing and a cardboard suitcase sticking her head into a taxi cab window, her back to the camera. This was the resulting work of genius.

“I can’t! I won’t!” cried the taxi driver as the woman leered over him, through the window of his car.
               “I’m afraid you have no choice,” she said, bringing her reptilian face closer. Her hat and thick hair framed the scaly snout that protruded from under it, her sharp teeth forming a horrifying smile. Her eyes were like headlights, bulbous and yellow, parted by black slits which the driver could only assume were her pupils.
               Hesitantly, haltingly the man obeyed, reaching for the documents that lay in his glove compartment. He kept looking over her shoulder at passers-by, hoping that someone would see through her innocuous disguise, but to all the world, the velociraptor leaning her head through his window was a simple poor woman with a cardboard suitcase.
               Velociraptor. He remembered being taught about those in his government training. Six foot four beasts that hunt in packs. Their claws could tear open nearly any prey within seconds, and their insatiable hunger for meat was surpassed only by their insatiable hunger for power. And, oh yes, their disguises had grown ever so clever in recent years. They could walk through a street filled with innocent people, and none would see them for who they were, unless one were to notice their obvious dinosaur faces. Granted, this was New York City, where looking someone in the eye was almost a criminal offence, so they walked the streets as if invisible.
               This one gave him no chance to avoid recognizing her for what she was. The long, leathery tongue flicked out towards him, as if to determine what flavor he might be.
               “The documents, if you please,” she reminded him through that seemingly endless row of teeth.
               The man finally gave in, and handed her the manila envelope which contained everything.
               Everything. The blueprints, the reports, the memos, everything.
               Three clawed fingers reached out from within her coat to receive the precious tribute, and the hideous smile, it seemed, widened.
               “There,” she said, “Was that really so hard? Now, Agent 2, I suppose I should be on my way. Send my regards to whatever fool it is who now sits in your superior’s office in the Pentagon.” The horrid head retreated away from him, those reptile eyes never wavering from his face, until it was entirely outside of his car. “Best of luck explaining all of this to them,” she added, and was off, shoes clicking on the cracked asphalt, snout held high, a hint of a satisfied grin still etched on her face.
               The man buried his face in his hands. He had failed. Headquarters would be attacked this very evening, he knew it. The fledgling experiment that of the President would fail. He and the rest of the FBI were about to meet their doom this evening – the ‘raptors were now one step ahead.
               “No,” he said aloud. He looked up, and it seemed a cloud lifted from his vision. He could still warn them. There was still time.
*             *             *
               “I know, Agent 2.”
               The words hit him harder than a fist. A flood of either embarrassment or relief – or perhaps both – washed over him.
               “You do?” He asked, and remembering himself, added, “Mr. President.”

Wednesday, May 4, 2011

This was also Far Too Much Fun

The intro is totally Harry Potter. Wanna know why? Because this totally started out as a Harry Potter fanfiction. No joke. I wrote a Harry Potter fanfiction.

Kind of. None of the original characters were in it. I never got very far with it. But it was totally the same universe.....except that I decided to put it in the future. Because....you know....haven't you ever wondered what the wizarding world would be like in the future, with Muggles getting more and more technologically advanced every year and pretty much taking over the world, bit by bit? Come on. Don't tell me you never wondered.

Well, anyways, I actually enjoyed writing this. I tried to make it less fanfiction-y - like, Toggle was originally a house-elf (cough). And Esther was originally a Squib. She still kind of is, but not, because this isn't HP. Stop laughing. It's undignified.


Lazarus Peter Johann Savatt was an unusual man in many ways. For one thing, he was blind, which gave him cause to wear round black spectacles that gave everyone the spooks, and walked with an old-fashioned redwood cane that bore an intricately sculpted design of mermaids set in the gold cap at its top.

For another, he spoke in the oddest way. He certainly had a strong accent of some sort – the difficulty was discerning which. It wasn’t English, American, French, Scottish, Chinese, Swahili, Indian, Spanish…….. nothing that the citizens could think of seemed to match. Some of the few who speculated on the matter and had done some traveling in their time commented that it sounded like it had a bit of everything mixed in. To save headache, however, many decided that it was just an unusual speech impediment.

Yet another thing was that he kept mostly to himself. He was very friendly with his neighbors, of course, and polite to strangers, but apart from a greeting and perhaps some small talk, he did not associate much with society. He stayed in his house much of the time, coming out only to stroll down the road and head to the main city, cane in hand.

He also dressed strangely, in neatly pressed suits with long calf-length coats, and had a fondness for bizarre and colorful fabrics (which most attributed to his being blind), as well as pointy, high-heeled maroon leather boots with gold buckles.

Yet the strangest and most unsettling thing of all was that he had a strange aversion to high technology. His house was not fully computerized, as was standard, and from what people had seen of the inside, there was no television, computer, light-switch – some questioned whether his house even had electricity. The only evidence of energy usage was the lamp on his porch, which was always brightly lit at night.

Well, no one could really accuse him of being a lunatic, so for the most part he was left alone. He didn’t do any harm to anyone, and he seemed like a nice enough person in spite of his oddities. So, having their own lives to live, his fellow citizens went on with their existence with only a curious glance in his direction.

*

On one particular evening in March, when most of the residents of Outer New Reddington were asleep in their beds, the streets were very quiet, and empty – save for the tall young woman walking down its length with a purposeful stride.

If someone had seen her, they would have furrowed their brows and said that she reminded them of Mr. Savatt. She had the same arched sort of brow he did, and the same pointed chin, except that hers was softened a bit. That was where the similarities ended, though – where Savatt’s hair was thick, dark and curly (usually combed back and gelled smoothly over his scalp), hers was auburn and cut severely short, barely an inch long; where his eyes were a pale, milky blue, hers were a dark hazel; and where he was usually of a calm, placid temperament, her eyes sparked fiery determination, and her movements were brisk and impatient. She wore loud, clashing fabrics, and a strange assortment of clothes, but otherwise seemed far more normal than he did. Forgetting, of course, that she was currently walking down a deserted street in the middle of the night.

Arriving at Mr. Savatt’s porch, she marched up the steps and, rearranging the bags she carried, knocked on the door.

A high-pitched, rather aggravated voice spoke: “Who is this?”

“You know bloody well who I am,” the woman said, speaking in the same indiscernible accent or possible speech impediment that had puzzled the neighbors for so many years. “Let me in.”

“Master Lazarus is not receiving visitors,” the voice said. “Come back tomorrow.”

“Toggle, for the love of all that is good and holy, open the door.” The woman growled.

There was a pause. And then the lock clicked, and the door swung open, allowing the young women entry into the house.

She stepped over the threshold slowly, looking around with a curious expression at the house’s interior. “How long have you been staying here?” she asked abruptly.

A little man – about three feet tall – closed the door, and turned to look at the woman with suppressed irritation. He was dressed in a very fine red tunic and trousers, with pointed slippers on his feet, an Arabian flavor to his features, and a very dignified set to his shoulders.

“Two years, madam.” he answered shortly.

“Longest yet.” The woman murmured. She looked up at the ceiling again, noting now the constellations painted on the ceiling. “The night sky, as seen from Alexandria.” she said, mostly to herself. She swallowed, and renewed her determination. “Where is he? I need to speak with him.” She said to Toggle.

Toggle’s mouth tightened. “Master Lazarus is busy at the moment – if you would care to wait, the parlor is just this way.”

“No, that won’t be necessary, Togal.”

Master Lazarus Savatt stepped out from a shadowy doorway, looking suitably mysterious with his black lenses and his long, mud-stained purple coat. He smiled, reaching out to touch the young woman’s face. “Esther. My, it’s been….” He raised his eyebrows, his hand sliding over her rigid face to feel her nose. “Good heavens, you’ve grown! I swear, your nose feels longer.”

“Shut up.” the woman said impatiently, pushing away his hand. His smile widened. “Stop that.” She snapped, now somewhat sulkily. “I’m twenty-six years old, Laz. Twenty-six. Not twelve.”

He laughed at that – far too heartily, for Esther’s taste. Her mouth tightened, but she made no remark.

“W-well, then,” Savatt regained his composure, clearing his throat. “Let us repair to the parlor, shall we? Togal,” he said to the little man, “would you mind whipping up some of that special tea I’ve been saving? And while you’re about that, would you also mind adjusting the heat on the antidote in the laboratory? I believe there is a small chance that I might have left it too long.”

Toggle bowed, and briskly went about his tasks. Savatt smiled again. “So, Esther,” he said, walking in the direction of the parlor, the woman trailing behind, “Tell me, how long has it been, exactly, since you’ve darkened my doorstep? I’m having a bit of difficulty remembering. Ten years? Twelve?”

Esther’s mouth tightened. “Thirteen.”

“Oh, so you’ve been keeping track, then, have you?” Savatt said, lifting and waving his cane in the air. The dark room was immediately illuminated with a merry golden light, emanating from several spheres attached to the ceiling.

“Don’t start.” she said, somewhat wearily. Savatt sat down on the exceptionally comfortable-looking couch near the fireplace, and patted the space next to him. Esther hesitated, and then reluctantly took the indicated space.




Thursday, April 28, 2011



Okay, Okay! So this is ISN'T actually a real literary post. But this was all I could really contribute. Story-wise, this IS the de-coated, dangerous version of the monk I did that little fact sheet about. Those clawed gauntlets he is currently brandishing are the 'guraem' gauntlets mentioned in the descriptions, if you care to remember.

I guess, to justify this post, I should also explain where I'm going with this. With my resources the way they are, I can't actually draw and publish this comic, but I can still develop and write it. That's the basic idea, anyways. So I'll be posting pictures and maybe even sketchy comic pages every now and again. I'll still be posting 'real' writing here, but I think that writing a comic also qualifies.

Let me tell you a little bit about what my idea for this comic is, and give me some feedback:

The story is set on a planet that was literally broken up long ago - what's left are four main islands, each housing their own seperate nation, with a scattering of tiny little islands surrounding them called the 'Free Islands'. Each of the four islands are connected by a Great Chain, and it is through this Chain that trade and negotiation is possible.

Zardool is the longest island, and also the wealthiest and most technologically and academically advanced, as education is held in very high esteem.

Krogoa is the largest island, and the most heavily forested, where the culture is very pacifistic and centered on family and community.

Bardosa is the most arid and desolate island, and thus the least productive agriculturally - the people are tough and hard-working, and they rely greatly on their religion to govern their land and maintain order.

Ssardeel is the second-largest island, and widely considered to be the most beautiful - the culture is centered on the arts, and it is also where 'magic blood' is thickest and most powerful.

This is all situated in a universe where space is not the airless vacuum it is in our universe - living organisms with lungs can breathe outside of their relevant atmosphere without any equipment. This has made interplanetary travel possible for many centuries (please don't question the science. It's magic. Shazaam.), and contact with alien civilizations is nothing new. There is even an alternative version of Earth floating around somewhere, but we'll get to that later.

Soooooo....yeah. That's the foundation for my comic. Will I ever make it real? Maybe. When I know what I'm doing. And have time......do dodo dodo dooooo......

Tuesday, April 19, 2011

A little more of Aelwys; some history

  “Indeed,” Edyl replied calmly, “That is true. I don't know much about it at all, I admit, but word in the taverns and in the seaports is abuzz with talk of this other Oracle. Some curious folk notice our flight to Ceadlund and hear about this pretender to the Holy Throne, and feel something big is about to happen. Some folk fear the Sovereign, and begin to lose faith in the Oracle that works so closely with his Highness.”
“Why, that's blasphemy!” cried Aelwys, cheeks burning. She had never heard such talk back in Hammon, and she was ashamed to hear it here.
“That's exactly why the soldier-priests aren't keen to let anyone who isn't Wygar by birth to leave for Ceadlund,” said Edyl.
“Surely they can't think that Mother and I—”
“They do, Aelwys,” came Mother's voice from the bed. She was now sitting up, looking regal as ever, and listening intently to their conversation, “They do.”
“But why?” She asked, flustered.
“There is much you need to know,” said Mother, “But now is not the time. All will be explained when we arrive in Ceadlund. Until then, know that our lives were in danger in Hammon. We didn't flee to defy the Oracle, you understand?”
“I do,” she replied.
“Good,” said Mother, “Now you should have some of last night's cider and something to eat.”
After Aelwys had a cup of the now-tepid cider, though no less delicious, and a few pieces of bread before her, she ventured to ask what had become of the others who had been inside the night before.
“Some have gone on to Llynceth,” said Edyl, “And others are foraging for berries and herbs. I should advise you to do the same,” he added, “For the forest at the foot of the mountains is rich in fruits these days, as no one dares venture there any more. It's much safer during the day. Other food will be hard to come by on the road, except for the last safehouse before Llynceth.”
“How many hours of sunlight have we got left?” asked Mother.
“Perhaps four or five,” guessed Edyl.
“Then I'll go and gather berries,” Mother said, as she hopped out of her bed and picked up her bag.
“I'll go, too,” said Aelwys, but Mother shook her head.
“No,” she said, “You stay here. The soldier-priests are looking for two false Wygar women traveling together. I'll be back within an hour or so.” Mother pulled the cloak over her shoulders and drew the hood over her head, and set out.
The afternoon passed without incident, and at Edyl's encouragement, Aelwys joined Collin, one of the younger Wygar boys, and they set about to patrol the immediate area. She stepped out to view their surroundings in the light of day, and was surprised at how pleasant it all seemed. The horrors of the night prior seemed little more than nightmares in the wake of the sunlight which poured down on them between the sparse clouds that thinly veiled the sky. The barnacled wreck lay half-decayed along the foot of a small cliff, draped in patches of moss which hung like tattered banners. Clusters of tall pines hid it from view of the main road, though there was an old trail that veered off the road and wound its way to the wreck, and Aelwys could only assume that this was the trail they had taken the night before. Beyond the path the rocky earth fell away, and beyond the edge of the chasm, the crashing waves heralded the sea that lay below. Behind, the road negotiated between the pine forest that crowned the inland hills and the ever-sheerer cliff that held the ocean at bay, up to the stone bridge where the first hidebehind appeared. Ahead, the road forked around either side of a jagged stone hill, which thrust heavenward like a great thumb; to the left it veered through a denser cluster of pines, and to the right it wove along the cliff. Several other hills were visible behind the first, and it was seemed that the two roads might not meet again for some distance.
Young Collin explained excitedly to Aelwys that the left road was old and neglected, and the hamlet that lay that way was full of peculiar people who did not trade much or even speak to many outsiders. The Wygars had some doings with them from time to time, but their lot preferred to remain locked inside their great stone walls amongst the hills, especially in recent times.
“How did the ship ground herself all the way up here?” Aelwys asked Collin, who seemed to take great pride in his familiarity with the lore of the haunted cliffs.
“Dear lass,” said he, “Have you not heard the stories of the war between the two Sovereigns?” The manner in which he spoke was almost comical, as though he were a charming lord and she were a fluttering admirer.
“I cannot say I have,” she confessed, suppressing a smile, “Was it long ago?”
“Very,” the boy answered gleefully, “So very long ago! A great long time ago, there came an armada from across the sea, led by a man who dared call himself King of this land!”
“The audacity!” she laughed. His eyes were wide and his face grew grim.
“Aye, that's what it was! Audacity. So the battle began! We Wygars were better-liked back then, and we also fought! The Sovereign used our learnings of alchemy to fight the Usurper and his ilk! In that day, when we Wygars were respected by other folk, we held libraries and even a university where the arts of alchemy were taught and cherished. Some great work of alchemy was used to scatter the Usurper's armada! Some vessels sank to the bosom of the ocean, others disappeared altogether, and this vessel – she was tossed like a child's toy to her sandy grave upon this very land.”
Collin fell silent and watched her anxiously with a broad grin on his face, as if awaiting applause. Aelwys sat agape, both amazed by the story and by the uncannily impressive language that issued from the boy's mouth.
“How do you know all of this?” she asked.
“My father taught me!” he said excitedly. “We learn the stories of our fathers exactly as our fathers tell them! I learned almost every word of that one. I couldn't remember some of the words, but I tried to make up some new ones. Did you like it?”
“Very much,” said Aelwys honestly, “Your people have incredible stories!”
“Most other folk don't think so,” he replied, “But I'm quite happy that you do! Wait.”
They paused. They could hear a new sound above the steady rhythm of the sea pounding herself against the stony cliff, though the sound was very unclear. Still the sun shown through the clouds, and the afternoon appeared peaceful, yet as the sound grew clearer, a great chill seized Aelwys' spine. Heavy hoofbeats. Both she and Collin stared down the road toward Hammon, and saw in the distance a great plume of dust announcing the approach of many riders.